Highlights of Concussions
Syd.
L. Johnson argues that high school football concussions are very dangerous to
the youth. She claims that high school football players make up the most of
sport-related concussions. Johnson develops this claim by first researching how
many football-related concussion victims, in the United States, have ended up
in the emergency room. Johnson explores that 23,000 football-related
concussions in the United States do end up in the emergency room. Johnson
develops this claim by second studying high school football players. Johnson
discovers youth take longer than adults to recover from a concussion. Johnson
develops this claim by third researching deeper into why youth are more
effected by the concussions. Johnson finds that youth five to eight-teen years
old serve for nearly 90% of the concussions. Johnson discovers Second Impact
Syndrome is a rare neurological condition that causes swelling in the brain and
brain herniation. Brain herniation is caused when there is a huge amount of
pressure to the brain, and a neurological condition is related
to the nerves in the body. Johnson also finds that normally in this condition
100% of the victims die in the next five minutes. Johnson
looks at more research on the syndrome and finds that some people question if
the syndrome even exists. Lastly, the author gives ways to prevent a concussion
from happening. One idea that she gives is that players under the age of sixteen
should not be allowed to tackle in football. This to me could cause a lot of
problems in the game of football. She said as they get older they can go back
to tackle football. Syd. L. Johnson’s purpose is to inform people of the rising
rates on high school football concussions in order to make it more known and
raise awareness. This work is significant because it allows you to learn more
about people’s opinions on high school football concussions, and ways to help
stop them from rising.
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